Bindas BawaL
5:40 AM Edit This 12 Comments »Tomar sathe alap amar sey Robibare
Prottek soptahe opekhay thaktum pordar arale ;
Chotobelay bujtum na tomar nibaas kothay
Boro-ra bolto sorge r ami vabtum TV-r porday ||
Abdar gulo mone mone korley pawa jai –
Emoni vul dharona chilo amar chotobelay …
“Class-a jeno aj amay pora ta na dhore
Porikhar din ta jeno pichiye jai r koekta din pore”
Moja ta besh jomechilo kak_talio vabe –
Vabtum odRisso lok ta besh khamkheali ache
Ghorer dewale dhup-dhuno nie besh koshmejaje ache ||
Half-yearly porikhar por asto para-r mukhe
Onnek ta din chuti r nutun jama-r gondho haate …
Voi chilo na voktti seta aj bojha ektu kothin
Tobe TRP ta besh valoi chilo diner por din ||
Hotath kore ‘bawal-ta’ j ki vabe laglo
Bodh buddhi strong hotey complication ta barlo ||
Pawa-na-pawa-r hiseb ta jotil hote thaklo
Tomar osthitto tao aste aste ube jete laglo ||
… Tobe aj tomar proti amar kono raag-biddesh ney
Chottobelar Santa Clause-r motoi r tomar 'value' ney ||
Bokar moto jangla-r kone moja r jholay na
Mithhe ashas diye lok r ami thokai na ||
Besh moja lage tomar fan-following dekhe
Tara j ajo tomay akre beche thake ||
Valo-monder hiseb ta aj boddo besi soja
Ojana kichu buli aOre dhuye fela jai bojha ||
Tomay ghire joto sob ved-bived-donddo
Vaye vaye kolakuli ta aj tomar jonnoi bondhho ||
Chap-r kothay nai ba gelum
Gyan-papi bolbi amay tora
Keu keu to 'already' bar kore felechis chora :P
Jaihok , tumi tomar moto thakO eder kache
Tomar kache amar aj dorkar furiye geche ||
Ami thaki amar moto chup-chap bindas
Tomay chara valoi thakbo eta amar bisas ||
12 comments:
khub bhalo.....tui jemon,lekha ta thik temon-i hoeche, i loved it...especially last para ta. maajh raat-er khaamkheali pona ta-r result ta besh shundor!!!
Aree ami jantam na tui eto bhalo likhish!! Good jone buddy...m proud of u
Bindasssssss......... as always... I don't know which comment or what kindda comment is suitable to suit ur writing... coz its LEGEN.... wait for it DARY...........
as usual khub sundar hoeche...eto kisher chap tor??obosyo rate na ghumiye jodi eto productive jinish beroi toh majhe majhe ghum k dub marte bolbi.. :P ~mishti
this is the 2nd time I read it.... man u r just.... Aweeeeeeeeeeesome........... Hi 5. its like saying a Blonde girl that she has got nice jugs..... [:P]
Each time i read your artifacts ,its like each time I become a fan of writing.. its like at this moment m an ultra super duper crazy boozy fan... [:D]
good job..raat e na ghumiye eto bhalo poem lekha is really appreciable :P.. its really very good..as if an experienced poet has written..tui sotti writer hoy ja..keep up the good work..
tomar ae chora ta laglo fatafati....
porer ta hobe ...r o jomjomati....
bah....tui to bhaloi kobita lekha suru korechhish......bhogobaaner saathe kabye lorai ta besh innovative laglo! khub bhalo hoyechhe
Baparta ki bol to 2r????????????
r haaaaaa,,lekhata solid hoechhhe.........2r lekhar ai style ta amr besh laage.............
Nice way of dealing with pent up frustration i must say.
Ami seriously jantam na tumi eto bhalo lekho...ek kothaye awesome!!!
khuub sundor.....really impressive.... :) u r simply blessed!!!
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