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Mathar vetore Gray-matteR-ta amar ektu hole-O pocha
Matha mOta na opOdartho - dondO onnek boro
Hiseber khata ses hoe gelO , uttor millo na ajO
Permanent marker chai bolche bisesoggo
Hater rekha ube geche , hoe geche oshpOshto -
Vaggo-k dosharop kore chOlche jibon bindaSs
Khachi-dachhi ghumachii ... felChi dirGhonishas !
Shift-delete merechilum tOr chObitakee
Flash memory te permanent storage system kenO achE ...
Kotha chilo samle nebo nijeke thik-y
tobu nijer ojante sob hoe jai HijiBiji
Oi nirabotaii domon korlo ekta puro Odhaaye ....
Abhinoi korbo valO thaka-R , palte nebO poth-tai
Du-haat petechilum swapno dekbo bole
Laath-O khechium vikhaa-R dali-te
R ami vikhaa korbo na thik korechii
Unmuktto akase nishaas nite sikhechii !!
Vule gechi aj sokale toke mail korte
Vule gechi kaal rate tor swapno dektte
Esob ghyan ghyan ami maje maje kori
Bad baki somai ami facebook-a pool kheli
Tor valo thakaa-ta-ke ami ' like ' korechii
Invisible chat-bOx khule onnek ta somay katiyechii ...
Jani na esob kotha khute khute barkorchi kenO
Majhe majhe toder matha-ta khawa ektu valO
Dukhho R frustration-R tag gulo ebar hata
Oneek holo vaat boka ebaar tolpi-tolpa gOta !!
14 comments:
tolpi tolpa gotate aro 1 yr boss... but the creation is good... super like... ;)
nice turn of events in the second half ;) Darun !
besh bhalo. i'm no judge of poetry but mone hocche bhaloi hoyeche
bhalo hoyeche....look at the brighter side also
baepok baepok......khub bhalo hoyechhe re. karone okarone amar fatafati legechhe. tumi to jomiye dichho guru....ebar publish kore fel sob kota!
Seriously guru kono kotha hobe na.. just fatafati Bises kore facebook er pool er use r ending ta darun .. tomar modde ato ta talent ache to lukea rekheco keno???
ghyama....
sotty..........bpk hoechhe.......
amr darun legechhe........ lekhar dhoronta besh valo..........
haate jotokkhn kolom achhe tor chinta nei...............besh valo legeche.chaliye ja...
complete Byakaron boss, chaliye jao, 1st hardcopy publish amr chai :)
toke thik kore chintam na...akhon bujhte parchi..really ur talent is god gifted..etake konodin nosto hote disna...i jst loved..which 1 sud i say?nah..not 1...bt all of them...keep up the good work!!
this was simply too good.....
khub sundor hoyeche re
erokom likhe jas, khub bhalo likhis tui
heart-attacking kobita, portey bhalo laglo, bujhlam
khub sundor darling...mathaye haat buliye debo ei ta lekhar jonno
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