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Protisthito hoar doure bondhi ek nutun emarote
Bodlalo poristhi,bodle gelo sohor…
bodlalo na kichu sovab,
Bodlalo na kichu jobab ||
Achonno hote chaiche mon
Akhre dorte chaiche kichu vule jaoa sriti-k
Sunte chaiche kichu na bola kotha ||
Khujche kichu hariye jaoa protichobi hotath gojie otha somporker mayajale …||
Asepaser manush gulo jokhon bastto nijeder akher gochate
Ami tokhon kobor theke osttitto khojar pothe ||
Bondhu-der vir theke onnek dure
Mithe kothar jonjal soriye
BangartoK somporker jotilota eriye Mon chaiche aj ektu eka hote
Pete chaiche santi,ghorer ek kone
Chonnochara vabna amar melche mone dana
Tai aboltabol sobdo jure nosto korchi somay khana ||
9 comments:
khub sotty kotha...sober 1ta somoy mone hoy re erkm.....really nc.....
chonnochara holeo.......moner kothagulo tor lekhate prokash peyche khub sundor vabhe!
amar to khub beshi chonnochara mone hoyeni...i think its v wellsorted,n v well written...besh coherent....but yes...tor trademark sadness ta thik-i roye geche eta teo...khub bhalo likhechish...onekdin por likhli.i hope next ta porar jonne eto ta wait korte hobena though
tr somoykhana nosto hoini akdm....:)
bes paka kobi kobi vab fute uthce ebare....
bes valo...chalie jao boss.....
tobe ebare ekta anonder kobita chai.
...pabo to?????
SouRav.......(siGu)
mmmmmmmmmmm bhalo mondo dutoi laglo! good point s that ts transparent, vivid n untarnished!
bad point --the framework cd hv bn a bit bettr! chonnochhara holeo tar ekta abhinobotyo ache! seta arektu prokash hole bettr hoto!
amar mote
nbo offence plzzzzzzzzzzzz
hahahah... i think tor por por duto kobitake KIIT khub influence korechhe.... kotha tor aboltabol hote pare chitadhara na....
besh mojar..mon bhalo holo
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