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Tumi aj ochena amar kache
Kothay harie felechi tomay
Ta aj amar ojana
Nishas prosas-a pore na tomay mone –
Ashas dey na kono purono valobasa
Charpaser mitheye somporker berajale
Hariye geche amar chetona gulo
Tai kono bristibeja rate mone pore na sey din gulor kotha .
Rongin jole vase na tomar mukh
Sob hariye khuji aj onno kono sukh …
Sokaler kuasay kinba sada cigarette-er dhoyay –
Kichutey ny tomar sporsho
Ami aj sadhin , ami aj muktto
Kothay harie felechi tomay
Ta aj amar ojana
Nishas prosas-a pore na tomay mone –
Ashas dey na kono purono valobasa
Charpaser mitheye somporker berajale
Hariye geche amar chetona gulo
Tai kono bristibeja rate mone pore na sey din gulor kotha .
Rongin jole vase na tomar mukh
Sob hariye khuji aj onno kono sukh …
Sokaler kuasay kinba sada cigarette-er dhoyay –
Kichutey ny tomar sporsho
Ami aj sadhin , ami aj muktto
16 comments:
err.....kinda stupid!
khub bhalo likhe chis... [:)] 2r poems daily porbo ami..tateo judi amar bangla improve kore
bap re :|
BHALO HOECHE
NICE ONE
speechless!!
khb bhalo foshol beroy tr matha theke....
ami fan hoye gelam
interesting......dont give yp writing.....anander kobitar opekkhay roilum.....sudhu jano dukhye kobita na beroy !
bah..bes likhis to.......tahole bol khmkheyali hoar o onek luv achhe....lekha chalie jaa....r o kobita chai......bujhln...
daruuuuuuuuuuuun hoeche.
but ebar anander kichu akta likhe fel....khub bhalo legeche kobita gulo.....
khub bhalo hoeche.....im honestly a fan.....looking forward to sumthng a little more positive....anonder kono kobita...bt till then,...ochena tumi, lekha chalie jao.
too good to comment...bt cigarette spelling ta bhul...other than that its awesome...
eta jodi gaan hoto tahole lyrics ta bolbo Fossils band er moto!
eto bedona kothaye rakhis re????
xpression jst fatafati...amr kub valo legace....
kobe likli eta?????
SouRav.....(siGu)
chhondota bhalo laglo!!
"bhuul" sothhik bhabe bornito!
u r a genius.... r ke dekhlam ekdom 1st comment diyechhe lekha "errrr.... stupid.." or somethng like that...1 word for that person... if u cant create somethng from ur own dont criticize others..
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