oChena tUmi

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Tumi aj ochena amar kache
Kothay harie felechi tomay
Ta aj amar ojana


Nishas prosas-a pore na tomay mone –
Ashas dey na kono purono valobasa


Charpaser mitheye somporker berajale
Hariye geche amar chetona gulo
Tai kono bristibeja rate mone pore na sey din gulor kotha .


Rongin jole vase na tomar mukh
Sob hariye khuji aj onno kono sukh …


Sokaler kuasay kinba sada cigarette-er dhoyay –
Kichutey ny tomar sporsho


Ami aj sadhin , ami aj muktto

16 comments:

Anonymous said...

err.....kinda stupid!

ChAsMeBadDoOr said...

khub bhalo likhe chis... [:)] 2r poems daily porbo ami..tateo judi amar bangla improve kore

Anonymous said...

bap re :|

Anonymous said...

BHALO HOECHE

Unknown said...

NICE ONE

Unknown said...

speechless!!

mishty said...

khb bhalo foshol beroy tr matha theke....
ami fan hoye gelam

Unknown said...

interesting......dont give yp writing.....anander kobitar opekkhay roilum.....sudhu jano dukhye kobita na beroy !

Unknown said...

bah..bes likhis to.......tahole bol khmkheyali hoar o onek luv achhe....lekha chalie jaa....r o kobita chai......bujhln...

Sri said...

daruuuuuuuuuuuun hoeche.
but ebar anander kichu akta likhe fel....khub bhalo legeche kobita gulo.....

gupta said...

khub bhalo hoeche.....im honestly a fan.....looking forward to sumthng a little more positive....anonder kono kobita...bt till then,...ochena tumi, lekha chalie jao.

Unknown said...

too good to comment...bt cigarette spelling ta bhul...other than that its awesome...

Unknown said...

eta jodi gaan hoto tahole lyrics ta bolbo Fossils band er moto!

Anonymous said...

eto bedona kothaye rakhis re????
xpression jst fatafati...amr kub valo legace....
kobe likli eta?????

SouRav.....(siGu)

mitankar said...

chhondota bhalo laglo!!
"bhuul" sothhik bhabe bornito!

super maniac said...

u r a genius.... r ke dekhlam ekdom 1st comment diyechhe lekha "errrr.... stupid.." or somethng like that...1 word for that person... if u cant create somethng from ur own dont criticize others..

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